Fifth Draft...

There is so much that we changed in this draft, especially at the beginning of the music video. At the beginning, we scraped the L.O.V.E. letters moving and replaced it with a sort of establishing shot that we filmed at Alexandra Palace. It's a shot of Elle running up to the telescope and looking through it, which reflects how she is looking back into her previous relationship, which the music video depicts.

We also incorporated our script which we needed, and as we all have different album names we had to settle with just one for the credits, so embarked on some research...

LP - Long Play

EP - Extended Play

Extended play lies in between a full album and a single. So the CD in the shop would have our music single, broken arrow and plus maybe two or three more. So we changed the opening credits to 'Broken Arrow EP' to mean the single and it will avoid any confusion with album covers. We also included our production name "SEEN producitons" from year 12 as it was easier and it fits with our group.

We also replaced a few clips; we used a clip of Elle singing at Alexandra Palace and another Ikea shot. We chose the ALexandra Palace clip because the shot uses the rule of thirds and to the right of her you can see a lot of sky line and all the lights from the city of London. The Ikea shot was also changed and we used a scene from another kitchen, we just simply liked this kitchen better and it was also less shaky than the previous one.