Wednesday, 30 March 2011
Sixth Draft...
In this draft, we only made minor changes and perfected some shots seen as our deadline and screening is nearing...We changed the overlapping shot of the stop motion from a scene with the couple smiling to a scene of them on the bed where Alex is annoying Elle. This supports the idea of the stop motion better as it is of a broken arrow, and their relationship is now broken. Personally, I preferred the juxtaposition of the two shots, but this might confuse a teenage audience so we changed it.
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